ACCEPTANCES September 17, 1983 A.S. XVIII

 

Kingdom of An Tir

 

*James the Blackhawk. Name correction; formerly James Blackhawk.

NOTE: Batonvert states that "the Blackhawk" is consistent with period usage, and further research supports this. Animals were sometimes used as nicknames in bynames in England during our period.

 

Kingdom of Ansteorra

 

Anne Louise of Bluecastle. Name approval only.

 

Edwin FitzLloyd. Ermine, chausse’ raguly vert, a tower gules.

NOTE: Nice heraldry.

 

*Eleyne de Clermont. Badge. An ermine spot vert.

NOTE: Excellent period-style badge.

 

*Elspeth Cathlin MacGilbert. Per pale purpure and argent, a winged cat passant to sinister counterchanged.

NOTE: Excellent heraldry.

 

*Janet Virago Parva of House Morningstar. Name change; formerly Janet of House Morningstar. Badge. Pean, a bend gules surmounted by a double-headed lion rampant Or.

NOTE: Do you really want to identify yourself as a virago??

 

*Janet Virago Parva of House Morningstar. Badge. Gules, two chevrons couped and conjoined in fess Or within an orle of bezants.

 

Muireall of Rosebarrie. Per chevron azure and barry of 8 Or and azure, in chief two double roses Or, barbed vert.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

Rupert the Unwary. Name approval only.

 

Kingdom of Atenveldt

 

*Aldred Colson. Joint household badge with Elinor Aurora of Rosewood. A crescent argent between five rosebuds in annulo, blossoms outwards, Or, barbed vert.

 

Alfric Northwind. Per fess indented azure and sable, a fess dancetty and in base a compass star argent.

NOTE: Draw the compass star bigger and the fess much wider.

 

*Atenveldt, Kingdom of. Title for Twin Palms Pursuivant.

Athelwulf Bolverksson. Per chevron argent and azure, in chief three crosses crosslet in chevron gules and in base a great helm affronty resting atop an anvil argent.

NOTE: I have altered the patronymic to correct usage.

 

*Beau Marishka of the Romanies. Badge for House Wanderlust. Per pale azure and vert, in pale a compass star between the wings of a winged wheel Or, the wings elevated and displayed argent.

NOTE: A wheel is by default a "wagon wheel."

 

*Constance of Hoghton. Name change; formerly Constance the Mad Hatter of Milan. Sable, a pall between in fess two mullets of eight points Or and in chief a tower argent.

NOTE: Her old arms becomes a badge.

 

*Dragan Volkov. Per chevron Or and argent, two towers sable, each charged with a sword inverted argent, and an enfield passant to sinister guardant proper.

NOTE: Appeal accepted. An enfield proper has a red fox's head and forequarters, a grey wolf's back half, and yellow Hawks talons for the forelegs. This has poor contrast. Please color the enfield in the above manner and use a dark grey.

 

* = individual has pre-existing CoA file.

 

*Elinor Aurora of Rosewood. Joint household badge with Aldred Colson.

NOTE: See Aldred Colson for blazon of joint household badge.

 

Eowyn Rebekah of Windhaven. Per chevron sable and chevronelly Or and gules, in chief three suns Or.

NOTE: Very good heraldry.

 

*Garwed Cadburiensis. Name change; formerly Garwed of Cadbury.

 

Gytha of the Bows. Name approval only.

 

Jean Pierre Robert Name approval only; see RETURNS for device.

NOTE: I have deleted the non-period hyphen.

 

*Kathryn of Iveragh. Augmentation of arms. Per bend sinister wavy sable and gules, in dexter chief three passion nails inverted bendwise in bend sinister gules enflamed Or and as an augmentation in sinister base an inescutcheon of "azure, a demi-sun in glory issuant from base Or within a bordure argent."

NOTE: She retains the right to use the unaugmented arms.

 

Nicholas Simon deKane. Name approval only; see RETURNS for device.

 

Symond Bayard the Grey. Azure, a candle and candlestick argent enflamed proper, between a dexter point ployé, a sinister point ployé, and a base argent.

NOTE: Chapé ployé enhanced is not period and therefore is not allowed. Use instead two points, as I have used here. The choice of Symond was unfortunate, as that put you in conflict with the infamous Simon Legree. (Legree is the "Cajun" version of Le Gris.) In order to register the device, I have removed this conflict by translating "le Gris" to "the Grey." This plus Bayard is then enough difference.

 

Symond Bayard the Grey. Badge. Or, a Malayan tapir statant to sinister breathing flames proper. (Acrocodia indica)

 

Kingdom of Caid

 

Abdur Raliman Curom Memo Hazara Khan-ad-Din. Name approval only.

NOTE: This was a tough one. The appeal was well documented. I agree that "khan" is Arabic for inn or house, and that it was used as a name element in period. Unfortunately, "kahn" is also the usual transliteration of the Mongol title equivalent to king. The College was fairly evenly split on this question, being slightly in favor of the appeal. My decision is that khan may be used, but only as part of an obviously Arabic name and only in some form other than just "han." Thus one can have the period surnames Khansá, Kh n , Kh ni, or al-Khans , or the alternative transliterations of Qan, Cane, Kane, or Chan. (I would rather not see ha'n, as that will be confused with the Han dynasty.) (Crescent: Please pass this on to the Negra-Khan people.) With Abdur's permission, I have changed Khan to Khan-ad-Din, an Arabic faith name meaning "Inn of the Faith." This is acceptable, although it would be better practice to place it earlier in the name.

 

Alianora of Aberdeen. Name approval only; see RETURNS for device.

 

Andrew MacEth. Vert, a portcullis argent within a dragon dormant widdershins in annulo Or, a chief argent.

 

Artven Mildthryth Dafydd. Purpure, two chevronels between a unicorn's head couped argent, crined, a harp and a Latin cross Or.

NOTE: This would be more medieval if there were fewer different kinds of charges.

 

*Black Taylor of Lochaber. Badge. Vert, a dexter arm erased palewise embowed proper grasping a needle bendwise argent.

 

*Branwyn fer’ Corran. Badge for Charise de Coneclé. Argent, a Phoenix gules rising from flames proper, in chief a mullet of four points sable, all within an orle gules.

NOTE: This was previously registered as a personal badge.

 

Ceridwen ferch Dafydd. Per chevron Or and vert, in base a Celtic cross Or, and a chief embattled vert.

NOTE: Nice heraldry. Draw the chief much wider. The name as submitted violated correct usage. You cannot use the name of a Welsh goddess plus the place name "o Gymru" ("of Wales"). Also, no Welsh citizen would say s/he was "of Wales," but rather that s/he was of a particular place in Wales. I have therefore deleted "o Cymru." The use of just a female given name and a male given name does not appear to be correct period Welsh usage either. In order to register the nice device, I have therefore inserted "ferch" to make Dafydd into a patronymic.

 

*Damon of the Lake that Flames. Azure, a bordure of flame proper.

 

*Daphne of Penguinroost. Per bend azure and Or, in bend three mullets of four points gules between in bend sinister a harp seal couchant guardant argent and an Emperor penguin statant affronty, head to dexter, proper. (Aptenodytes forsteri).

 

*Dynadan do Pico. Quarterly Or and argent, in saltire two headsman's axes and dependent from the junction a hangman's noose sable, all within a bordure gules.

 

Ettien Roland Pèlerin du Fauçoneau. Argent, goutté de larmes, a falcon displayed, wings inverted, within an orle embattled on the inner side gules.

 

*Felinah Tifarah Arnvella Memo Hazara Khan-ad-Din. Name change from Felinah Tifarah Arnvella Memo Hazara.

NOTE: See Abdur (p. 2 above) for full discussion.

 

Gottfrid Litebjörn. Quarterly gules and purpure, a bear rampant, and on a chief argent a fleur-de-lys purpure and another gules.

NOTE: I have corrected the spelling of Litebjörn. The phrase "of three Polars" makes no grammatical sense. Polar is an adjective, not a noun. If you want to be of the three polar bears, then say so. For the time being, I have deleted "af Tre Polernas." The gules and purpure has poor contrast. The fleurs-de-lys would be much better if they were of the same tincture.

 

Helmut Wolfgang von Drache. Badge. Gyronny gules and argent, a Chinese dragon involved in annulo guardant sable, scaly, spined and the face Or.

NOTE: Draw the dragon with three toes. Four-toed dragons were reserved to the King of Korea and five-toed ones to the Emperor of China.

 

Joseph Grantham of the Broken Antler. Name (see RETURNS for device).

 

*Kamal Misliwa ibn Javid Daoud Khan-ad-Din. Name change from Kamal Mishwa Ag Javid.

NOTE: See Abdur (p. 2 above). This name would be more correct in form if Daoud Khan-ad-Din preceded Mishwa.

 

Kyle Gustov Kennson. Name (see RETURNS for badge).

NOTE: Kennson is a patronymic. The use of it as a place name ("of Kennson") is not a valid usage. I have therefore deleted the "of.' Kyle is his mundane given name.

 

Mahmud Ali ben Sinan. Name. (see RETURNS for device).

 

Miranda Douglas of Schiehallion. Per bend sinister vert and argent, a horse's head erased, crined of flames, and two thistles conjoined pilewise counterchanged.

 

Myriam Adrienne Reynaud des Mille Roses. Name (see RETURNS for device).

NOTE: "Myriamme" is not a valid French variant of Miriam, so I have changed it to Myriam.

 

Ole Fleetfoot. Azure, in pale a natural leopard courant Or, spotted sable, and a mug argent.

NOTE: "The Fleet of Foot" is not a period formation for a byname. I have changed it to the period of Fleetfoot. English bynames were a single (possibly compound) word with the possible addition of the word "the."

 

*Phelan of Penguinroost. Per bend sinister azure and Or, in bend sinister three mullets of four points gules between in bend a narwhal naiant embowed bendwise sinister and an Emperor penguin statant affronty, head to sinister, proper. (Aptenodytes forsteri).

 

Rhys Ian Glenowen. Vert, a harp and on a chief Or a flanged mace fesswise sable.

NOTE: The carving on the harp is a matter for the artist.

 

*Robert du Chateau du Dragon. Badge for House Dragongrotto. Vert, a mermaid affronty, head to sinister argent, maintaining in her dexter hand a sword inverted proper, all within a dragon dormant widdershins in annulo Or.

NOTE: Robert is Andrew MacEth's father.

 

Shandon Yar Mohamed Gehazi Memo Hazara Khan-ad-Din. Per bend sinister raguly sable and Or, a sun of six greater and six lesser points and a naginata bendwise sinister counterchanged.

NOTE: See Abdur (p. 2 above) for full discussion.

 

Kingdom of Meridies

 

*Aethelthryth of Acleah. Blazon correction. Gyronny sable and vert, a doe lodged guardant argent between four acorns in cross Or.

 

Allan of Moffat. Name (see RETURNS for device).

 

*Anne of Benetlea. Azure, a saltire gyronny gules and Or, in chief a butterfly Or.

NOTE: This would be better with a second butterfly in base. As it stands, it is somewhat unbalanced.

 

*Arielle de Brabazon. Barry wavy argent and azure, on a pale vert an iris slipped and leaved argent.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

Bartholomew of Boroughbridge. Per pale argent and vert, a spider tergiant displayed proper, in chief a roundel counterchanged. (Arglope arantia).

NOTE: Draw the roundel larger.

 

Bertrand l'Ours du Rivage. Reblazon. Argent, a cross fleury throughout sable, surmounted by a bear rampant erminois, between in bend sinister two fleurs-de-lys sable.

 

*Caitlin MacDonnell. Badge for Clan na Eachmara. Counter-ermine, on a bend engrailed Or three thistles purpure, slipped and leaved vert.

 

*Dragoun's Weal, Shire of. Sable, an annulet within and maintained by two dragons in annulo, wings displayed, each biting the other's tail, all within a laurel wreath Or.

 

Eleanor of Ashley. Per bend Or and sable, a tournament lance vert between in fess two trees counterchanged.

 

Elspeth of Harilow. Name (see RETURNS for device).

 

*Glaedenfeld, Shire of. Badge. Gules, three dexter arms conjoined at the shoulder and flexed in pall, armored and gauntleted argent, each fist grasping an iris Or, slipped vert.

 

*Godelind of Windemere. Badge. Argent, a friendly castle gules, in chief a cat's face sable.

NOTE: A friendly castle has an open gate. The cat's face provides the necessary one point of difference from mundane arms.

 

Guillermo Juaquin Pérez Barrios. Checky counter-ermine and vert, a water-bouget within an orle argent.

 

*Isabeau the Fool. Reblazon. Sable, in bend a mask of comedy per pale gules and Or, and a mask of tragedy per pale Or and gules.

 

*Julitta des Chevaux. Per fess vert and sable, a horse’s head couped within a bordure embattled Or.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

* Meridies, Kingdom of. Badge for Goslings' Guild. Per bend sable and argent, in sinister chief a swan naiant argent.

 

Pellinor aus dem Sturm. Argent, a seal statant affronty, head erect to dexter, sable, on a chief embattled azure a mullet argent.

NOTE: The seal is in trian aspect. Draw it entirely affronty. The correct translation for "of the storm" is "aus dem Sturm."

Phillip Stuart of Silverhill. Per saltire azure and argent, a sun in glory gules, fimbriated Or, within a bordure sable.

NOTE: The fimbriation is somewhat complex and is really not needed. It mars an otherwise medieval-style device.

 

*Richard the Alchemist of Wales.. Badge. Gules, an ibis passant to sinister close argent within a bordure embattled Or.

 

*Robert Hightower of Meridies. Sable, a bend sinister argent, overall a tower checky argent and vert.

NOTE: Earl Kevin Perigrynne gives permission.

 

*Troll Fen, Shire of. Sable, a cypress tree blasted trailing moss from its branches argent within a laurel wreath Or, both issuant from a base barry wavy argent and azure.

NOTE: Normally the entire laurel wreath should be visible. I grant an exception in this case.

 

Uthyr Peregrine. Per bend nebuly azure and argent scaly sable.

NOTE: Please draw the line of division correctly. The dexter chief corner should be azure. The scaly was drawn wrong. Replace the black lines with sable crescents in the same interlocking pattern as the black lines. See the margin for an example.[DRAWING IN MARGIN, NOT SHOWN] When comparing two devices that consist only of fields, the requirement is that there be both a difference of line of division/partition and of the tinctures.

 

Zachary Fairfax. Per chevron azure and gules, a chevron between two quills in chevron and a fox's mask argent.

NOTE: Draw the chevron much thicker.

 

Kingdom of the Middle

 

Aidan Morgana Evans. Argent, a bend between a flame and a lymphad under sail vert.

 

Alan Culross. Per fess Or and sable, a phoenix counterchanged.

NOTE: The tiny ashleaf is too tiny a charge to be used in this way and mars an otherwise very medieval device. I have therefore omitted the leaf.

 

*Alasdair of Ramsay. Azure, on a mullet of six points between in annulo six anchors Or an anchor azure.

 

Alastair ap Maelgwyn. Name only (see RETURNS for device).

NOTE: I have deleted the hyphens, as they are not period usage.

 

Aleid van Groningen. Per bend sinister sable and Or, a dragon passant and a lymphad under sail sable.

NOTE: Good heraldry. The pennant on the ship should point to dexter, in the same direction as the wind is blowing.

 

*Alen Elegil. Ermine, on a pale engrailed azure a mullet of six points elongated to base argent.

 

Alfred von dem Hügel. Name only (see RETURNS for device).

NOTE: Hügel has an umlaut.

 

*Alistair Kirk. Quarterly ermine and Or, a raven volant sable between in bend sinister two compass stars sable, all within a bordure azure.

 

*Alistair Kirk. Badge. Quarterly ermine and Or, a compass star azure.

 

Annyse Lionstone. Name only.

 

Bartruda aus dem Wald. Name only.

 

Berach of Stonehelm. Per fess azure and argent, a wolf rampant within a bordure counterchanged.

NOTE: Excellent heraldry!

 

Bianca Casaccio. Per bend sinister vert and gules, in pale two hawk's bells argent.

 

Caradoc Llew Du ap Morgan. Name only (see RETURNS for device).

 

*Caterina da Monticello. Name change from Caterina de Monticello. Badge. Per pale sable and gules, a mountain lion statant Or atop a base pointed argent.

NOTE: This could also be blazoned as tierced en pointe, but I dislike having an animal standing atop a line of division. (Standing atop a base is bad enough.)

 

Cerdic Jenner. Name only.

NOTE: "Cedric" was a misspelling of the period Saxon name Cerdic and was invented by Sir Walter Scott, appearing first in Ivanhoe in the 19th century. I have therefore changed it to Cerdic.

 

Christopher de Lockewod. Name only.

 

*Dark River, Shire of. Sable, a pile bendwise wavy inverted throughout and in sinister chief a laurel wreath argent.

NOTE: Draw the wreath bigger.

 

Edward Geoffry de Montaign of Huntington. Gules, on a bend sinister Or three roses sable, seeded argent, within a bordure engrailed Or.

NOTE: Nice heraldry.

 

Isaac FitzHugo. Azure, two chevronels inverted and in chief an estoile of eight rays argent.

NOTE: Very good heraldry. You indicated that you wanted Isaac, son of Hugo, so I used the correct phrase, "FitzHugo." The phrase "de Hugo" means "of Hugo," as in a place name. Hugo is a given name and therefore not a place name.

 

*Ithriliel of Silver Lake. Gules, a compass star within and conjoined to a decrescent argent, within a mascle issuing from each corner three strawberry leaves Or.

NOTE: Draw the mascle thicker. (She is a duchess and has the right to use strawberry leaves.)

 

Jobyna von dem Rotstuhl. Per fess azure and argent, a unicorn's head couped to sinister argent and a wheel gules.

NOTE: "Von" takes the dative case.

 

*Mary Katherine de Macey. Gules, a cat salient to sinister Or atop a mace fesswise reversed argent.

NOTE: Draw the charges bigger.

 

Padraic MacLochlan o Loingsigh. Name only.

NOTE: There is no apostrophe over the o.

 

Rachael Webbe. Per fess vert and argent, on a pale between in chief two sheep rampant and in base two shuttles a shuttle and a sheep rampant, all counterchanged.

 

Richard Lawson of the Lake. Quarterly sable and barry wavy argent and azure, an Arabian lamp enflamed Or.

 

Seaxburh Blaeceage Aldhemesdottir. Gules, on a fess between two quills fesswise argent a shoe gules.

NOTE: Good heraldry. Quill pens, like arrows, have their points down when palewise and therefore to the sinister when fesswise. Nicknames come between the given name and the patronymic. Since this was the form used by the submittor on her form, I have so changed the name.

 

Sylard of Eagleshaven. Name only (see RETURNS for device).

 

Tabitha Ashwell Culross. Argent, a gazelle courant between three gillyflowers stemmed gules.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

*Tsvia bas Zipporah Levi of Granada. Name change from Tsvia bat-Zipporah ha-Levi of Granada. Name approval only (see RETURNS for device.

NOTE: In the SCA, when transliterating from non-Roman alphabets, it is and has been the policy to use the standard transliteration, as that way others can learn how to pronounce this form and those who already know the language will recognize the form and not be confused. I have allowed bas for bat and Levi for ha-Levi, but Tsvia and Zipporah are as easy to pronounce clearly as Ts’vee’a and Tseepora, and the latter are not consistent with period orthography.

 

*Urien Aflonyddwynt ap Taliesin Darianlas. Name change from Urien Aflonyddwynt.

NOTE: Name appeal accepted.

 

Wilhelm von Ulrichen. Or, on a cross nowy sable an estoile argent.

NOTE: Good heraldry. "Ulrich" is a given name and so cannot be a place name. I have changed it to Ulrichen, a place in Switzerland.

 

Willem the Watchful. Name only.

 

Kingdom of the West

 

Hans von Steinhaus. Or, an anvil sable, and on a chief embattled gules a sword reversed proper.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

*Jeanne d'Audierne. Name change from Jannette of the Square Circle.

 

Julienne de Vigne. Ermine, on a pile invected purpure, a fleur-de-lys Or.

NOTE: Excellent heraldry!

 

Moira Gillian of Greenbough. Vert, chapé Or, two pine boughs fructed and a unicorn passant counterchanged.

NOTE: With her permission, I have changed Morgillian-to Moira Gillian. Her friends can certainly address her as Morgillian, as that soft of contraction is period for informal address, but does not seem period use for a formal given name.

 

*Richard the Dark. Sable, on a chevron cotised between three star jasmine blossoms argent three pellets.

NOTE: Batonvert correctly reminds me that addition of a pair of cotises is and has been considered one major point. This plus the change from quatrefoils to star jasmine blossoms is then sufficient difference from Croad: Sable, on a chevron between three quatrefoils argent as many ogresses.

 

Roland de Trevieres. Checky Or and vert, a pile throughout argent surmounted by a fleur-de-lys sable.

NOTE: Good heraldry.

 

Rowena von Steinhaus. Vert, chapé Or, two crescents vert and an elephant's head couped, trunk raised, argent.

 

Sine na Mónadh. Or, on a pile inverted throughout purpure, in pale three crescents Or.

NOTE: Nice heraldry. The correct Irish word for "from" is "na." Monadh is a variant genitive singular form of móin = turf, peat, and, by extension, boggy land. If you really want "of the hill," then use "an chnoic." If you want "of the pasture," then use "na Innilte."

 

*Vakkerfjell, Shire of. Per pale argent and Or, two swans statant close respectant sable, maintaining in their beaks a laurel wreath vert.

 

END OF ACCEPTANCES

 

THE FOLLOWING ARE RETURNED TO SUBMITTOR

 

Kingdom of Ansteorra

 

Adelicia Alianora of Gilwell. Badge. Gules, an owl Or.

NOTE: The badge conflicts by exact outline with James NiacClilurain: Sable, an owl argent.

 

Bran de Tintreak. Badge. Sable, a tower palewise couped at the base bendwise sinister, its sinister crenelation broken, Or.

NOTE: The badge conflicts with Towers: Sable, a tower Or and with Ellen of Neglamer: Sable, a conical-roofed tower Or ajouree in the upper sinister part. This really isn't period style.

 

Bran de Tintreak. Badge. Argent, a tower palewise couped at the base bendwise sinister, its sinister crenelation broken, sable.

NOTE: The badge conflicts with Frederick of the West Tower: Argent, a tower sable charged on its base with a cross Patonce voided argent. This really isn't period style.

 

Branwen Gwawr Aur. Azure, in chief a crow volant argent and issuant from base a demi-sun Or.

NOTE: The Order of the Golden Dawn was a famous occult order (Aleister Crowley was a member), and you may not claim membership. Please choose a different byname. The device conflicts with Jean de la Grand' Anse: Azure, in pale a dolphin naiant argent and a sun Or.

 

Branwyn O'Brallaghan. Badge for House Mightypaw. Argent, semé of pawprints, a pawprint sable.

NOTE: Many members of the College felt this name was silly. The badge is indistinguishable from an ermine field with a larger ermine spot. This conflicts with the famous arms of Brittany: Ermine. It also conflicts with the fieldless badge of the Wolf rank of the Cub Scouts: A wolf's paw print sable.

 

Jocelyn Celeste de Peregrina. Badge. Per bend sinister vert and argent, a peregrine falcon's feather proper.

NOTE: There is no such thing in heraldry as a feather proper. Feathers come in varying colors, even from the same bird.

 

Nanna Arinsgaetir.

NOTE: Name unacceptable. I find no mention of Arins or -gaetir in my Norse references. Please send photocopies of the pages you cite for these, and for Nanna.

 

Talene la Callida. Gules, a distaff argent.

NOTE: Name and device unacceptable. Please document Talene as a variant of Taliesin. Send photocopies of the pages you cite. The device conflicts with the badge of Jehane de la Marche: Gules, a mace argent.

 

Atenveldt

 

Aldred Colson. Badge. An enfield rampant argent charged on the shoulder with a crescent vert.

NOTE: This is too close to Jonathan Whitewolfe: Gules, ermined, a wolf rampant argent. Please get Jonathan's permission.

 

Atenveldt, Kingdom of. Heraldic title for Impellens Chartarum Pursuivant.

NOTE: It was the nearly unanimous opinion of the members of the College that Impellens Chartarum (Paper Pusher) is not consistent with period practice for heraldic titles, and that it is a joke submission. The appeal is therefore denied. I believe Silver Quill was registered for this position, so please warrant Lord Gustav as Silver Quill Pursuivant, as he does deserve a title. I see no need for a new title when there are already existing vacant, registered titles.

 

Constantine Peradan. Sable, a garden rose slipped and leaved, on a chief argent three mullets of four points sable.

NOTE: The fantasy arms of Corwin of Amber (Sable, a garden rose slipped and leaved argent) are so well known in the SCA that I feel that the addition of a charged chief (a common differencing in period) is not sufficient difference in this case.

 

Jean Pierre Robert. Or, a cross between four fleurs-de-lys gules, overall an escallop argent.

NOTE: The escallop violates the Rule of Tincture. Either shrink it down to be entirely on the cross or else make it ermine or a color such as sable, azure, or vert. otherwise, this is a very medieval design.

 

Maginfred Beorhtmaer Uhtric. Badge. Vert, a Snowy Owl close affronty proper perched on a branch sable, on a bordure argent a serpent wavy sable entwined with another gules. (Nyctea scandiaca).

NOTE: This is overly complex for a badge. The knotwork of snakes is not period heraldic style. Without them, the badge conflicts with Alleyne de Spencer: Azure, a Snowy Owl perched upon a branch issuant from sinister proper within a bordure argent.

 

Nicholas Simon deKane. Argent, in the first quarter a torteau, overall a Siberian husky puppy statant ululant sable.

NOTE: This is landscape heraldry. It is not a period arrangement. Do not use puppies, as you cannot tell the difference on a device between a grown dog and a puppy. The young of animals were not used as charges in period. The charges are not in a period arrangement. The dog's legs vanish on the field.

 

Kingdom of Caid

 

Alaric Erskin. Badge. Ermine, on a pale sable a flame proper.

NOTE: The badge conflicts with Smallbones: Ermine, on a pale sable a mascle Or (Papworth, p. 1007).

 

Alianora of Aberdeen. Or, a bouquet of heather bendwise sinister proper, bound of a ribbon tied in a bow, within an orle azure within six thistle blossoms orlewise in orle, that in sinister chief reversed, proper. (Calluna vulgaris)

NOTE: This is not period style. The thistles are in an unorthodox arrangement. I do not recall ever seeing a period usage of an orle within charges in orle. The positions of the thistles imply that they are on a bordure, which would lead a herald to blazon this as Azure, on an inescutcheon Or a sprig of heather proper tied with a bow azure, within a bordure Or, semé of thistle blossoms proper. This involves a charged inescutcheon, which is not allowed. Drop the thistle blossoms, use a sprig instead of a bouquet, and turn the sprig palewise.

 

Angelina Nicollette. Badge. On a bottle-nosed dolphin naiant embowed proper an orange blossom argent. (Tursiops truncata)

NOTE: Argent on grey violates the Rule of Tincture.

 

Astra Christiana Benedict. Badge. Per fess azure and purpure, on a fess argent between a mullet and a cross crosslet Or a dragon couchant azure, wings elevated and addorsed sable.

NOTE: This is too complex for a badge. It has five tinctures and four types of charges.

 

Elizabeth Tremayne of Silverleaf. Badge. Argent, two iris blossoms azure, slipped and leaved vert, conjoined in base, within a bordure potenty azure.

NOTE: This conflicts with Cassandra Boll von Bayer: Argent, a sprig of three bluebells azure, slipped and leaved vert, within a bordure embattled azure.

 

Goldwin of Britain. Badge. Upon a bezant, irradiating eight points, in saltire two spiked maces with thrusting spikes at both ends sable.

NOTE: The badge conflicts with Wendryn: Azure, a sun in splendour Or. At a distance the maces look like an unhappy face. The odd bezant is basically a variant of a sun. There is not enough difference.

 

Joseph Grantham of the Broken Antler. Gules, a cross Or, overall a moose’s head erased proper. (Alces alces)

NOTE: This conflicts with Barnaveile: Gules, a cross Or (Papworth, p. 613). The head is drawn mostly on the center of the cross and does not fill enough of the shield to change the cross from primary to secondary status. Therefore there is only one point of difference. Were the moose’s head drawn significantly larger, you would have a violation of tincture by having brown on red.

 

Kyle Gustov Kennson. Badge. Vert, a horned conical helm argent, banded and nasalled Or, within a bordure argent.

NOTE: Badge conflicts with Maria Teresa de la Peña: Vert, a rabbit rampant within a bordure argent.

 

Mahmud Ali ben Sinan. Per bend sinister argent and Or, a bend sinister sable between in dexter chief a scimitar fesswise reversed inverted azure and in base a crescent vert.

NOTE: The device violates period usage for both Saracenic and European heraldry. Saracenic heraldry never used vert for personal arms, as green was the holy color. The scimitar and crescent are not in a proper arrangement for European arms. They should be in bend and the scimitar should be bendwise sinister.

 

Myriam Adrienne Reynaud des Mille Roses. Argent, a pall gules between a fox passant guardant, a sprig of three pink garden roses stalked and leaved proper and a castle triple-towered purpure. (Vulpes vulpes, rosa ruga)

NOTE: This is overly complex and has excessive use of proper. It is not period style. The roses are not in a period position. Placing an ordinary between three different types of charges is not good period practice.

 

Roland MacDonnell. Argent, on a fess gules between in chief three pheons vert and in base a sheaf of three arrows sable, a bow Or.

NOTE: Name unacceptable. This is a joke name, which is not allowed. It is an obvious play upon Ronald MacDonald. According to the Crown Prints, he is also using the sobriquet "the Golden Archer." This is supported by the golden bow in the device. This is too much. The device is otherwise acceptable.

 

Kingdom of Meridies

 

Allan of Moffat. Per chevron inverted sable and Or, a pall per chevron inverted Or and gules, between in chief on a bezant a cross patée fitched at foot, and in fess two crosses patée fitched at foot gules, each within an annulet sable.

NOTE: This is too complex and not period style. Please simplify by using a simple pall gules between three crosses patee fitched at foot counterchanged, or some other, simpler version.

 

Anne of Worthenbury. Or, a seahorse erect gules, crined, unguled and finned purpure, within a bordure gyronny gules and purpure.

NOTE: As stated in the Supplement to the Rules for Submissions (1/16/82), you may not use gyronny gules and purpure, as there is not sufficient contrast.

 

Archon the Seeker. Sable, on a lozenge fesswise argent a mascle fesswise vert, all within an orle vert fimbriated argent.

NOTE: Although much better than your first try, this is still overly complex. Orles should not be fimbriated. The overall style is not period style. Please simplify. Try an argent orle. The lozenge fesswise is rather unusual. It would be more medieval if it were palewise.

 

Elizabeth of Dendermond. Badge.

NOTE: Blazon correction unacceptable. We no longer register tinctureless badges and so the tincture cannot now be dropped.

 

Elspeth of Harilow. Or, a unicorn's head erased sable between two flaunches vert, overall a chaplet Of four pansies proper, the leaves counterchanged.

NOTE: Device unacceptable. Charges should not surmount flaunches. This is too similar to a chaplet of roses. Pansies come in many colors and so may not be termed proper without further specification.

 

Greymourne Basilisk, Shire of the. Gules, a basilisk erect within a laurel wreath argent, on a chief wavy Or an ogress.

NOTE: This name was returned in the July LOA&R. The arms seem acceptable, but would be better with two or three ogresses on the chief. The laurel wreath should be drawn more circularly.

 

Reinhold the Bone Collector. Sable, semé of bones fesswise, on a pile argent a scythe gules. (Bones proximal phalange (finger bones))

NOTE: The name does not appear to be a possible period occupational name. In combination with the device, there is too much reference to the Grim Reaper. Many members of the College found this either offensive or non-period practice. Please choose a different byname, such as Bonefield.

 

Thosonn Jeandorian. Per chevron inverted Or and gules, two swords, the sinister inverted, counterchanged, on a chief embattled purpure two double-horned anvils Or.

NOTE: Thosonn might be a patronymic, but it is not a given name. Jeandorian is a combination of two real given names and so is not made up. Dorian is out of period and thus so is Jeandorian. The two swords should be in the same direction. The combination of per chevron inverted and a chief is not period style. The gules and purpure combination is a poor one. The whole result is not period-style.

 

Kingdom of the Middle

 

Alastair ap Maelgwyn. Sable, a stag salient between in bend sinister two mullets bendwise sinister all within an annulet conjoined to the stag's attire and hind hooves argent.

NOTE: Device unacceptable. Having a stag within and conjoined to an annulet like this is not period style. The two mullets bendwise sinister are also odd and just add more complexity. Shrink the stag so it doesn't touch and expand the thickness of the annulet.

 

Alfred von dem Hügel. Or, a wyvern erect vert, winged gules, and in dexter chief three hurts, one and two.

NOTE: The device is very unbalanced and is not a period arrangement. It looks like a cartoon of a wyvern juggling three balls. Put the hurts in chief or have the wyvern between them in pall.

 

Caradoc Llew Du ap Morgan. Vert, on a chevron argent a Maltese cross between two lions passant respectant sable.

NOTE: The device conflicts with Kemys: Vert, on a chevron argent three pheons sable, two of them pointing to the sides of the escutcheon, the other downward (Papworth, p. 489).

 

Conrad of Northfield. Badge. Azure, in fess a lion queue-fourché argent, charged on the shoulder with a heart gules, and a jaguar maintaining with its sinister forepaw a date palm branch palewise proper, combattant.

NOTE: This is too complex for a badge. Please simplify.

 

Dur of Hidden Mountain. Badge. Argent, a cross within and conjoined to a mascle sable.

NOTE: This is identical to the mon of Hotta and Sakura in Simosa (MON, p. 65).

 

Elena Zarifa bint Hakim y Illa'n.

NOTE: Spanish does not have any word beginning with Ill-, so Illa'n would seem to be incorrect. Zarifa is a recognized transliteration of the Arabic word for wife of the Sharif, the ruler of Morocco. Zarifa is therefore a title, so it cannot be used. You could be Elena bint Hakim, although that combination is somewhat unusual.

 

Megan of Silverthorne. Azure, in bend sinister a mullet and a crescent bendwise within in annulo six crescents overlapped, points inwards, argent.

NOTE: This is not a period heraldic arrangement. Those crescents are not drawn correctly. They should be fatter and more circular. The design is rather Moorish. Try something like Azure, in pale a mullet and a crescent within an annulet argent (assuming that doesn't conflict).

 

Sylard of Eagleshaven. Sable, a plate surmounted by a kraken displayed gules.

NOTE: The red kraken on the black field is color on color. A kraken differs from an octopus by having a long, pointed head.

 

Tsvia bas Zipporah Levi of Granada. Purpure, a garden rose bendwise sinister argent, slipped and leaved vert, between in bend two plates, within a bordure engrailed Or.

NOTE: The stem and leaf of the rose violate the Rule of Tincture. Make the stem and leaf argent.

 

Vatavia, Barony of. Badge for the Order of the Star of Vatavia.

On a mullet of eight points bendwise azure surmounted by a mullet of eight points pierced argent a dragonfly displayed Or.

NOTE: The name conflicts with the Order of the Star in France and the Star of Merit in Ansteorra.. The badge is overly complex and appears to most of the College to have four layers. The dragonfly is too tiny a charge.

 

Vittoria di Borgia.

NOTE: Name unacceptable. The surname "di Borgia" was listed among the restricted surnames. It may not be used in the SCA, as it counted as a royal house in Italy, in addition to being one of the more infamous family names in history.

 

Kingdom of the West

 

Llerrett de Granada. Badge. Azure, a pilgrim statant to sinister argent holding a staff proper.

NOTE: This conflicts by identical outline with Ton the Traveler: Argent, a pilgrim statant to sinister holding a staff sable.

 

END OF RETURNS

 

Pray believe, my Lords and my Ladies, that I remain

Your servant,

 

[Signed]

 

Master Wilhelm von Schlüssel

Laurel King of Arms

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